Front Cover: The image you have taken is fantastic because the clothes your model is wearing represents your genre, but since the background is too white they blend in together and you kind of lose sight of the model. I also like the banner at the bottom because it tells the reader what's included in the magazine. However, I think that you should add more sell lines because at the moment it looks a bit too plain and there's too many white spaces. Also, I think that it would be better if you moved the 'UNSTOPPABLE' banner down so that you are able to add more text on the left. You could also add a twitter or facebook page for the magazine so that your readers are able to get more information.
Front Cover: The image you have taken is fantastic because the clothes your model is wearing represents your genre, but since the background is too white they blend in together and you kind of lose sight of the model. I also like the banner at the bottom because it tells the reader what's included in the magazine. However, I think that you should add more sell lines because at the moment it looks a bit too plain and there's too many white spaces. Also, I think that it would be better if you moved the 'UNSTOPPABLE' banner down so that you are able to add more text on the left. You could also add a twitter or facebook page for the magazine so that your readers are able to get more information.
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